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The
language glossary
- Clarifying concepts
By
Debbie Harris, Contributor
AS
IT was with Modules One and Two you
are required to submit a piece of
work in Module Three which will count
as a part of the Internal Assessment
for the course. Beginning this week
I will provide you with a written
sample of language used in the context
of a Jamaican social situation. The
sample you chose may be one of your
own original pieces which you wrote
or it may be work done by someone
else. Whatever you choose to use for
the analysis it must deal with the
same theme which is evident in the
Reflective and Expository Sections.
Remember that your teacher must approve
the piece of your choice. You will
be expected to comment on registers,
dialectal variations, attitudes to
language and communicative behaviours.
(I have given you some brief notes
on each in previous lessons). This
week we will look at one such written
sample and next week you will be given
an analysis of it. Discuss it with
your classmates and see how well you
can analyse it. Read the passage below
and write an analysis focusing on
registers, dialectal variations, attitudes
to language and communicative behaviours
shown. "Joe Joe started to take
Miss Blossom to pictures and little
by little the line of demarcation
between social friends and sweetheart
just blurred. Joe Joe tell her that
the married man better stop come to
her and Miss Blossom say him was only
a social friend and Joe Joe say 'Yes',
just like how him and her was social
friend and she told him he was
too jealous and him say yes he was,
'But I don't want to see the man in
here again,' and she said, 'Lord,
Joe Joe.'
Little
by little Miss Blossom started to
look after the children and look after
Joe Joe clothes and meals, is like
they choose to forget Bella altogether.
Then one Christmas time Bella phone
over the grocery shop and tell Mr.
Lee to tell Joe Joe that she was coming
home for Christmas.
Well
to tell the truth, Joe Joe never want
to hear anything like that. Although
Miss Blossom couldn't compare to Bella
because Bella was the first woman
Joe Joe ever really love Joe
Joe was feeling quite contented and
he was a simple man, him never really
want to take on Bella and her excitement
and her 'got to make it'. Anyway,
him tell Miss Blossom say Bella coming
home and she say to him, 'Well Joe,
I think you should tell her that anything
stay too long serve two masters, or
two mistresses as the case might be.'
Joe
Joe say 'Mmmmm but remember
say Bella is mi baby mother you know
and no matter what is the situation,
respect is due.'
Miss
Blossom said that, 'When Bella take
up herself and gone to New York and
leave him, she should know that respect
is due to him too.' Joe Joe say, 'Yes,'
but him is a man who believe that
all things must be done decently and
in good order, so if him was going
to put away Bella him would have to
do it in the right and proper way.
Miss Blossom say she hope that when
Bella gone again him don't bother
ask her fi nuttin. Joe Joe became
very depressed.
If
Bella looked like a checker cab the
first time, she looked like Miami
vice this time, inna a pants suit
that look like it have in every colour
flowers in the world and the colour
them loud! And Bella broader than
ever Oh man. Norman said, 'Bees
mus take up Bella inna that clothes
dey. Any how she pass Hope Gardens
them must water her.'
Bella
seemed oblivious to the fact that
Joe Joe was under great strain. She
greeted him as if they had parted
yesterday, 'Joe Joe what you saying
sweet pea.' Joe Joe just looked at
her and shook his head and said, "Wha
happen Bella?' They went home but
Joe Joe felt that he and the children
went to meet a stranger at the airport.
Bella had become even stranger than
before to Joe Joe. He began to wonder
exactly what she was doing in America,
if she really was just waitressing
at the club. Bella told him that he
should come forward, because this
was the age of women's liberation,
and Joe Joe told her that maybe she
should liberate herself outta him
life because he couldn't take her.
Bella
cried and said how much she loved
him. Then things became really intense
and it was like a movie and they had
to turn up the radio really high to
prevent the children from hearing
them.
Joe
Joe decided to just bite him tongue
while Bella was home. He took to coming
home very late all through the Christmas
season because the house was usually
full of Bella's posse including the
'Yvonne' of Bear Mountain Fame, and
when they came to visit the house
was just full up of loud laughing
and talking and all kinds of references
that Joe Joe didn't understand. The
truth was that he was really dying
for Bella to leave. He really didn't
much like the woman she had become.
First of all everything she gave him
or the children, she tell them how
much it cost 'Devon, beg you
don't bother to take that walkman
outside, is Twenty-Nine Ninety-Nine,
I pay for it at Crazy Eddies,' or,
' Ann-Marie just take time with that
jagging suit, I pay Twenty-Three Dollars
for it in May's Department Store.
Oh
Lord.'
Excerpt
from Bella makes Life, Lorna Goodison
in A World of Prose by David Williams
and Hazel Simmons-McDonald, 1994.
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