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Persuasive/argumentative writing
Natasha Thomas,
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Hello students. I hope you are on target in your preparation for the external examinations.

How was your discussion on the comprehension passage I had set for you in last week's lesson? Did you feel the intensity of the scene as you read it? Check your answers with mine.

1. B 5. C
2. A 6. D
3. B 7. B
4. C 8. C

Were all of your answers correct? If not, reread the passage with the answers in mind.

Today, I will begin our lesson on persuasive/argumentative writing.

Persuasive speech or writing aims at convincing the reader to agree with a particular viewpoint. It is supported by evidence and relies on persuasive devices to make its appeal.

The main focus of persuasive language is the audience, reader or listener. In persuasive discourse, the writer makes use of content, rhetorical devices, structure and language. All the choices are guided by consideration of the audience.

I am sure you are familiar with the following strategies writers or speakers use to persuade their audience:

  • Use of evidence
  • Use of analogy
  • Use of contrast
  • Use of repetition
  • Use of reliable sources
  • of authority
  • Appeal to emotion
  • Use of rhetorical question
  • (a question which does not require a verbal response)
  • Direct personal appeal
  • Irony/sarcasm
  • Hyperbole (overstatement)
  • Pun (a play on words)
  • Metaphors and similes.

Over the last few months, many Jamaicans have been inspired by the slogan 'Yes, we can!'.

If you've been following American politics recently, you would have realised that this slogan was very popular in the campaign of the current president of the United States of America, Barack Obama.

He is, indeed, an excellent public speaker. The next time you hear him or even one of our own politicians speak, try to identify the persuasive strategies which he or she uses.

In the meantime, read the following extract taken from a famous speech by Martin Luther King Jr and identify the strategies he employed:

I say to you today, my friends, that in spite of the difficulties and frustrations of the moment, I still have a dream. It is a dream rooted in the American dream.

I have a dream that one day this nation will rise up and live out the true meaning of its creed: "We hold these truths to be self-evident; that all men are created equal."

I have a dream that one day on the red hills of Georgia, the sons of former slaves and the sons of former slaveowners will be able to sit at the table of brotherhood.

I have a dream that one day, even the state of Mississippi, a desert state sweltering with the heat of injustice and oppression, will be transformed into an oasis of freedom and justice.

I have a dream today.

This is our hope. This is the faith with which I return to the South. With this faith we will be able to hew out of the mountain of despair a stone of hope. With this faith we will be able to transform the jangling discords of our nation into a beautiful symphony of brotherhood. With this faith we will be able to work together, to struggle together, to go to jail together, to stand up for freedom together, knowing that we will be free one day.

Isn't this a powerful speech? How many persuasive strategies were you able to identify?

Here are a few which are found in the extract:

  • Repetition of "I have a dream". This was used to emphasise Dr King's vision of racial freedom and togetherness.
  • Direct personal appeal - for example, his reference to "my friends" in the first line.
  • Metaphor - for example "table of brotherhood" to paint a picture of unity between the races in the context of a common understanding.
  • Antithesis (the balance of two contrasting words, phrases, sentences or ideas) - for example, "a desert sweltering with the heat of injustice and oppression will be transformed into an oasis of freedom" and "... we will be able to hew out of the mountain of despair a stone of hope".

Dr King makes a contrast between the oppressive situation of racial segregation and the freedom of racial liberation.

In next week's lesson, we will look at how you can write your own persuasive pieces. Have a productive week!

Local workmen team up with students from the University of South Carolina to do repairs on the canteen at Coke's View Primary School in Westmoreland, which was destroyed by Hurricane Gilbert in 1988.
- Photo by Dalton Laing

Natasha Thomas is a teacher at Glenmuir High School, May Pen.


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