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Biting
into poetry
Beryl
Clarke, Contributor
Recently,
I got the feeling that you, our bright,
confident, young Jamaicans, are not
as fearful of poetry as others used
to be in the past. Yes, some of your
peers have made that plain to me through
their positive attitude and their
mastery of questions given to them,
as well as their many entries in the
Jamaica Cultural Development Commission's
literary competition. It comes as
no surprise to me because haven't
you been saying, singing and rocking
to poetry since you were infants?
Take a trip down memory lane with
me, please.
Baa,
baa black sheep
Have
you any wool?
Yes,
sir, yes, sir,
Three
bags full
One
for my master
One
for my dame
And
one for the little boy
Who
lives down the lane.
All
things bright and beautiful,
All
creatures great and small,
All
things wise and wonderful,
The
Lord God made them all.
Little
Miss Muffet
Sat on a tuffet
Eating her curds and whey
Down came a spider
And
sat down beside her
And
frightened Miss Muffet away.
Think
you're in heaven, but ya living in
hell;
Think
you're in heaven, but ya living in
hell;
Think
you're in Heaven, but yu living in
hell;
Time
alone - oh, time will tell:
Yu
think you're in heaven, but you living
in hell.
If
yuh bright den yuh got de right to
education.
Mi
full up mi purse wid money,
Dem
tief it weh from me.
Mi
full up mi belly wid food
As
mi sneeze mi feel hungry.
Mi
full up mi brain wid learning,
Wid
sense an knowledge gran,
Mi
feel relief not a tief can tief
Mi
education!
Chile,
if yu got ambition,
No
matta how yu poor
Nutten
can keep yuh down now
Dere's
free schoolin galore!
Wid
one step bram bram into
De
bes' school in de lan
To
qualify an tun boasify
Wid
education!
Mas
Joseph tun foot nephew,
Jane
twis-mout gal Ritty,
Tata
daughter a study fe University.
Dem
countenance not handsome,
Dem
station is not gran,
Dem
clothes a wreck
But
dem brains can tek
EDUCATION!
Now,
we began with a nursery rhyme, went
to the chorus of a well-known children's
and young people's hymn, returned
to a nursery rhyme, spent a little
time with Bob Marley and ended with
a Miss Lou poem. Did you have fun?
I do hope so!
Isn't
it wonderful that as a people we find
it easy to write lyrics? Much of the
music that you enjoy started as poetry.
Somebody puts pen to paper and expresses
feelings, thoughts, ideas, hopes,
dreams, fears, praise and adoration.
Then, either that same person or someone
else creates appropriate music for
the words. We sing and enjoy the words
and some of us claim afterwards that
we don't like poetry. Well, my intention
is that as we go through the year,
you will come to love biting into
this fruit and extracting all the
delicious juice that will run down
your chin from it as you chew the
delectable lyrical flesh!
The
first thing I want you to do at this
point is to write a short poem, about
12 lines. Write on any topic you choose.
After all, poems are written about
any and everything - war, water, babies,
school, religion, clothes, books,
poetry, dogs, cats, rats, horses,
the moon, the wind, the sun, shoes,
eyes, lips, fruits, flowers and, of
course, love! Remember, you are as
qualified to write poetry as anyone.
Poems
written by pre-teens and teenagers
have been published and have been
well received by the public. Spend
time on this piece of work. Use your
creativity, then exchange with your
friends and listen to their responses.
All may not please you but do not
let that crush your spirits. Just
remember how many times you have said
unkind things about poets whose work
you have studied. You will not be
setting out to confuse your readers
or to make it difficult for them to
understand your work, but some will
complain and say that is what you
have done. When this happens, I hope
you will be better able to appreciate
the work of the poets whose poems
we will be studying.
Poets,
like other writers, want to communicate
with those who read their poems. They
want us to share and get pleasure
and benefit from their writing. What
you must keep in mind is that a poet
uses far fewer words than a novelist
or a dramatist/playwright to convey
his ideas. Poetry is dense; it is
highly condensed with every word and
every punctuation being worthy of
notice, if you are to enjoy the full
flavour. Finally, consider this. Have
you ever eaten an East Indian mango?
Would you be satisfied just to taste
the skin, or a little bite of one
side? Don't you want to have it all,
including the seed sometimes?
Have
a great week and the Lord bless you!
Beryl
Clarke is an independent contributor.
Send questions and comments to kerry-ann.hepburn@gleanerjm.com
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(From
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Matthews, André Hunt
and Russell Nelson look poised
to be leaders in the future.
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Beryl
Clarke is an independent contributor |